It can't get better than this!!

(My first poem… Copy rights reserved ;) )

I met a gal during those days of my college…

Soon we became close without our knowledge…

Days, weeks passed and then the months…

Our friendship grew and so the story begins...

I realized then I am having a crush…

But my heart said - don’t be in a rush…

Meanwhile, college was over I felt really sad…

Coz, we can’t meet so often, that’s too bad…

We promised each other, to be in touch…

This made me smile - even in a moment as such…

We kept our promise as the time flew by…

Through calls, chats, mails - and the meetings nearby…

My mind said 'no' and my heart said 'yes'…

She is the one, but I couldn’t confess…

Yes, I am in love and she’s my princess

but, am I her prince? I was clueless...

And then arrived the big day of my life…

I told her my feelings “will you be my wife”?

She didn’t say yes, nor did she refuse…

She was surprised - and, I was confused…

And then she agreed, with her lovely cheeky smile…

I was so on cloud nine! The wait was worthwhile…

I spoke to my parents and they agreed…

And now her parents, I thought, I’ll succeed…

We visited her place and spoke to her dad…

he too agreed, you see I am not that bad… :)

I got a better job and then built a house…

In that structure of my dreams I could see my spouse…

She too got the job in the same company…

And to my surprise - we were in the same team! Oh honey…

And then…

And then I fell down from my cot…

It was just a dream - So sad, is it not?

I stayed there for a while, dreaming about my love…

with a heavy heart, I whispered “It can’t get better than this… “

Comments

  1. Kp30 July 2009 at 22:08

    Sunil, Good one man...

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  2. Pritz5 August 2009 at 09:28

    :) nice...

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  3. kanu.....18 July 2011 at 23:38

    hey nice 1 sunil....

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  4. Sunil Padiyar19 July 2011 at 00:15

    Thanks Krishna, Prity, Kanu :)

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  5. Saru Singhal19 July 2011 at 05:41

    It's so nice. And yes, thanks for reminding us that it's a protected work:) Really Beautiful, especially the phrase, 'the wait was worthwhile'

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  6. Saru Singhal19 July 2011 at 05:42

    I forgot to write, I love the title:)

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  7. Sunil Padiyar19 July 2011 at 21:40

    Hey.. :) thanks a lot Saru.. :)

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  8. smiling soul20 July 2011 at 22:17

    lovely poem...
    keep writing & smiling :)

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  9. Sunil Padiyar20 July 2011 at 23:11

    Thank you Sowmya.. :)

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  10. Quirky Writes1 August 2011 at 12:52

    I just wish someone would write such a poem for me as well.... Really lovely....and I would say this poem can't be better than this....it's the best!!

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  11. Anonymous16 August 2011 at 03:47

    Beautiful poem. It's great to have found your blog (because you found mine) and now am here for good. :)

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